Problems in the amusement park.
Posted on: August 4, 2010
One day in an amusement park a boy got on a rollercoaster. The owner of the attraction was drinking coffee and the rollercoaster was out of control. All the people shouted and suffered. When the owner of the attraction saw the rollercoaster he started running desperately around.
The rollercoaster crashed onto the floor and broke down. One boy that didn’t have the seat belt fastened died. The other people that were in the game did not die because they had fastened the seat belt. When the people that were skateboarding saw the rollercoaster they were amazed. The owner called the ambulance. The doctors couldn’t come because the wheel of the vehicle had a puncture. The boy had already died.
Some men changed the wheel of the ambulance and it finally arrived. The professional doctor wanted to save his life. But it was late.
A boy went to his house and apologized. The boy said “I won’t go to the amusement park any more”.
by facundo di meglio.
2 Responses to "Problems in the amusement park."
August 4, 2010 at 7:17 pm
facu is so problematic but i love so much your story you are a exelent writing!
kisses marti dora
Helping Hands 
August 4, 2010 at 7:16 pm
It’s a very good story with issue
IT’S VERY NICE!
Abril Stokleand Sofia Garcia Mansilla.